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Author notes: I wrote this for an english assignment. It hasn't been edited by my teacher yet but will be soon (♫ printed in the magazine!♫). Personally I think this is a 8/10 story for me (like, what I expect me to write, not how I judge other peoples stuff). I like it and I hope you will too. Enjoy!
P.S. I like using A6 in my stories. Repetition much?



Mother-Ship
Fire and metal rained from the sky as if hell itself had opened. The frosty ground was hidden beneath the wreckage of a N.A.F mother-ship which was already starting to freeze after only a few minutes of exposure to the bitter cold.
A6 lay semi-conscious sprawled across the ice covered grass dreaming of a warm day; he had only vague memories of the hot sun from his childhood, before the ice had spread. At the dawn of the 23rd century, the world had suddenly become a giant snow globe with super-blizzards subjecting Earth to its sixth major ice age.
“Uhhhhggg…..”
K3’s moan of pain crackled through the radio, indicating that he too was alive.
Struggling to his knees, A6 pressed a button on the side of his helmet and spoke carefully into the com.
“Squad sound off.”
After a minute or so, K3 replied with difficulty, “K3 here.”
No-one else of the 5 man team had survived. Considering what they had just done, the numbers were pretty good. But ‘pretty good’ didn’t cover the lives of three elite soldiers.
“K3,” commanded A6 “signal your position.”
Even now standing up, the world was disorientating with the sky as clear and white as the snow laden ground. The only difference between the two was the cold burning carcass of a giant machine.
A green flare rose up into the air, indicating the location of K3. The snow crunched under his feet as he worked his way towards the source of the signal.
After about three minutes, A6 arrived at the location where his squad member should be. Instead he found a pile of twisted metal two metres high. He shouted into the depths of the tangle of metal.
“K3, are you there?”
No reply.
“K3!”
Beep!
A6 looked around for the source of the sound until he realized it was coming from his wrist. No, wait. It was coming from one of the five small electrocardiograms on his wrist. Three of them were black and blank. One was depicting a healthy heart beat. The last one showed a straight green line and emitted a long tone.
A6 turned away from K3’s grave and stumbled numbly forwards until he fell against a charred sheet of titanium alloy which had survived the destruction. The world had suddenly become dull and empty.
He was the last one alive. A6 realised that all those soldiers, even the forty support troops, had meant more to him than he thought. He had led them to their deaths. The soldier part of him was screaming.
“This is a war,” it said “people die. Stop moping about and get it together! You’re in a danger zone here!” But still he gazed at the screens, exhausted, and relived the terrible fates of his comrades.
X4:
B9:

The snowfall was clearing up now. The white clouds had moved away, revealing the black night sky which was covered with stars.

D2:
ESC:

K3’s screen was now blank.
A6 looked up at the sky. He decided that the memories of this place were to be left behind and trouble him no longer. He took off the electrocardiograms and placed them in the snow, facing up, and left just as the rosy fingers of dawn reached out across the sky.

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