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In an orphanage
there was an orange kid
who didn't run and play
like the other kids did.
He would build communicators
out of Lego blocks,
parts from the T.V.
and two alarm clocks.
When it was time to adopt
people would always stare
at his orange skin
and his orange hair
but he didn't care
he was far from home
no one else was orange
he was so alone...
but then one day
he lifted up his chin
opened up his eyes
and started to grin
with excitement
when this couple walked in
who were looking for a child
orange just like them...
there was an orange kid
who didn't run and play
like the other kids did.
He would build communicators
out of Lego blocks,
parts from the T.V.
and two alarm clocks.
When it was time to adopt
people would always stare
at his orange skin
and his orange hair
but he didn't care
he was far from home
no one else was orange
he was so alone...
but then one day
he lifted up his chin
opened up his eyes
and started to grin
with excitement
when this couple walked in
who were looking for a child
orange just like them...
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You should make this longer. More clever rhymes and stuff, let us get to know this orange kid a little more so as to grow to like him/her more.
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eh this one is ok i love Fire and Ice the best though!
sadly enough, i have a friend who is obsessed with orange, and is somewhat of an orphan
sadly enough, i have a friend who is obsessed with orange, and is somewhat of an orphan
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good poem though
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@skullmeat - great advice
@ken - screen shot and e-mail your friend the poem
@gem -
@ken - screen shot and e-mail your friend the poem
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i might have tallent to wirte such things but for now i'll just leave that inside and read the ones that creates.
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You are so awesome for this poem. It is kind of the same of Martin Luther King. When he can't play with no one. Until he changed the world.
Anyways, Good Poem!
Anyways, Good Poem!
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