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Gently, I stroke her hair
Without her, I would be in despair
Through the eternal love I give
The perpetual felicity I gain
someone wanna help me finish off this poem...? I cbf......
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13962010-10-181996-07-2227171 Gently, I stroke her hairWithout her, I would be in despair
Through the eternal love I give
The perpetual felicity I gain
someone wanna help me finish off this poem...? I cbf......
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I dunno, if you're talking about your gf then
"Gives me more for to live"?
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43605072010-01-211997-04-30266797Stephen
I dunno, if you're talking about your gf then "Gives me more for to live"?
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... Erm.... Solid effort....?
Hey, talk to me tomorrow!!!
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13962010-10-181996-07-2227171 ... Erm.... Solid effort....?Hey, talk to me tomorrow!!!
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Through the eternal love I give
The perpetual felicity I gain
Reworded
Through the eternal love I gave
The perpetual felicity I crave
? yes ?
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Through the eternal love I giveThe perpetual felicity I gain
Reworded
Through the eternal love I gave
The perpetual felicity I crave
? yes ?
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Nice one!
I feel stupid for not thinking of that now 0.0
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13962010-10-181996-07-2227171 Nice one! I feel stupid for not thinking of that now 0.0
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The dog is happy.
The dogs brown.
Like a dog walks it shall
I am so pro
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The dog is happy.The dogs brown.
Like a dog walks it shall
I am so pro
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... Pro you are.....
Hmm.... Now that I read it, this poem is ridiculously bad....
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13962010-10-181996-07-2227171 ... Pro you are.....Hmm.... Now that I read it, this poem is ridiculously bad....
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even with my suggested rewording?
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even with my suggested rewording? EVENTALIST
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hmm... Well, the rhymes are ok... But the structure is crap... just..... I feel like a retard...
Can we detelete topics?
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13962010-10-181996-07-2227171 hmm... Well, the rhymes are ok... But the structure is crap... just..... I feel like a retard...Can we detelete topics?
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yea you can, but why just cause you things its stupid? you can take a look at some of the posts/topics i made and even tho i think a few are stupid i don't go back and start deleting them, what is your main concern that some one will come by and start trolling? that's why the mods like gface, myself and calvin are here. 
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yea you can, but why just cause you things its stupid? you can take a look at some of the posts/topics i made and even tho i think a few are stupid i don't go back and start deleting them, what is your main concern that some one will come by and start trolling? that's why the mods like gface, myself and calvin are here. EVENTALIST
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