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The portal above my head opens
It builds momentum inside me
This is what happens when you die,
Except I am feeling it while alive
It's almost like my mind grows around me
Yet it's leaving me
Our minds are projections of our souls
My psyche breaks, my mind escapes, it shatters me down the very bones that used to hold me together
Slowly I fade into the explosion, the colors, the shapes, the feelings, they don't even have names while the frequencies over power me
Who was I before I was myself?
Or rather who else is inside me?
Psychodellics you manifest my soul.
Soul, your projection is my mind
If I'm losing my mind, what will happen to my soul?
It builds momentum inside me
This is what happens when you die,
Except I am feeling it while alive
It's almost like my mind grows around me
Yet it's leaving me
Our minds are projections of our souls
My psyche breaks, my mind escapes, it shatters me down the very bones that used to hold me together
Slowly I fade into the explosion, the colors, the shapes, the feelings, they don't even have names while the frequencies over power me
Who was I before I was myself?
Or rather who else is inside me?
Psychodellics you manifest my soul.
Soul, your projection is my mind
If I'm losing my mind, what will happen to my soul?
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I have inspired you? Really great and, not too long. A little too short but VERY nice.
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Reading other people's work does inspire me, however I wrote this about a week ago. I don't focus on how long my poem is, just aslong as it conveys my meaning.
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It's deep that. It's a bonus to my knowledge. Conveys my meaning.
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Yep, I'll make a poem about my travel to New York.
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That's nice, I actually live in New York. Where are you going to? The city?
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I think it's manhattan. I'll go in a ship too. That'll be a touristic visit.
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That's nice, I went on a World War 2 aircraft carrier there. I live about 3 hours from the city. I love going to the city this time of the year, the whole holiday season. They usually have this gigantic Christmas tree in the city in December, it's beautiful.
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You are very literate Ken, keep it up, glad to see more poems from you!
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