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Thank you, I will use this idea in the story. I just added another paragraph to it too.
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Nice Gemini! I don't have any ideas, but I'll think of one. Anyways good work.
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Loved every minute of it (lol 6mins )
I would like to see some illustrations for this
I would like to see some illustrations for this
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^,^ yeah Gemini ~ I agree with Daf, if you did some sketches...
I would gladly whip up some art based off your design
I would gladly whip up some art based off your design
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You got me interested... I am dying to know what happens to Nienoe7... great cliff hanger. Like Gameface said draw out the transformation process. I would have made the changes internal like eyesight, smell, only things like that at first and external changes being his skin pigmentation and hair color returning to normal too. Then shown the external changes like purple veins and what not. You doing great guy, keep it up!!!
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Drawings would be perfect! Nice story also.
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wow this is a really good story.I can't wait for the rest of the it!! :face:
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thanks, nice to meet you 80's girl, have fun around the site.
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alright 80's girl! glad you could join us ^,^
say hello in our welcome thread when you get a chance.
@Gemini - I don't know if I'm waiting for you to finish
chapter 4 or start chapter 5... but yes great story...
finish it up and then polish it up.
say hello in our welcome thread when you get a chance.
@Gemini - I don't know if I'm waiting for you to finish
chapter 4 or start chapter 5... but yes great story...
finish it up and then polish it up.
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I'll get started, I have been leaving everybody hanging. OK check the story a little later and it will have more to it.
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