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good story you copied that from last year from that one story about
people ho go to mars because of the atomic bomb any way you should
have given the planet a number instead of mars somthing like planet
SR388 it whould have made it seem more futuristicy
people ho go to mars because of the atomic bomb any way you should
have given the planet a number instead of mars somthing like planet
SR388 it whould have made it seem more futuristicy
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Why not just keep it Mars? It's set on Mars. I'm sure people will have no intention of renaming a planet. Lol Earth II is overused.
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Thanks Blue, I appreciate the feedback.
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Does anyone think there should be a twist at the end?
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yeah keep it up nice work. I'll have to find my M.A.N.M.A project story i think you may like wrote along time ago never finished it
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LOL, we make kinda the same stories, it is cool.
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Thank you blue.
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