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I'm basically looking for someone to play editor for me. I have about 35 pages of movie-script done, and I want some feedback before I revise, polish, and put the story into my project. Just want a couple people to read it to see if it makes sense or has plot holes or is too confusing.
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3261302009-10-121984-06-0435560Dunno
I'm basically looking for someone to play editor for me. I have about 35 pages of movie-script done, and I want some feedback before I revise, polish, and put the story into my project. Just want a couple people to read it to see if it makes sense or has plot holes or is too confusing.-CS
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I'll be one. How big is the file?
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I'll be one. How big is the file?C.O.R.N.
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I can read :-p
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I can read :-plemme peep!
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I'd love to have you both read it! But just remember that means you will know everything in the demo when you go to play it 
btw, could you guys pm me or email me any feedback? That would be better than posting it out in the open
The file size is 188KB.
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3261302009-10-121984-06-0435560Dunno
I'd love to have you both read it! But just remember that means you will know everything in the demo when you go to play it btw, could you guys pm me or email me any feedback? That would be better than posting it out in the open
The file size is 188KB.
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sure I'll pm you
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